Assignment 8

 



     I was impressed that each person has various view towards same article. As I looked through other students' assignment about the article 'LifeLike', I've got the writerly choices that I didn't knew, also I can face their distinctive interpretation on same writerly choices. What I found out about the writerly choices of Susan Orlean, was focused on the good side of it. However, the one I read while commenting to other points out that her quotation distracts concentrating on the contents of the text. That was really fresh view for me. I think that he could widen his approach to the negative effects of the writerly choices the author made because he thought flexibly. For commenting on my assignments by myself, it has similar feeling when I was reading and commenting to others' assignments. It made me to read my writing objectively. I could find the positive sides of my essay like fresh expressions as well as the thing should be reinforced.  I should read the article more flexibly and view it at the multiple perspective next time. So that I'm gonna write my essay not stuck in limited view point, but consider a various aspects as well.
   The audience of my essay might be unfamiliar to the article I'm talking about, so it is necessary to stating the context of the article and the reason of my thoughts. I will express my thought in a descriptive tone cause I'm interpreting this article and author's choices to the strangers who might don't know about the 'LifeLike'. I think my essay can be differentiated from others by expressions, the choice of author's writerly choices, and the feeling and thoughts about each writerly choices.